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When he looked now, he saw them all again, the ginseng and goldenseal and mayapple shooting up through the black soil, the earth surrendering its hidden life, all of it waiting to bloom again once the cold was gone. There was no need to be afraid. The coal was not heavy and the blisters on his hands didn’t hurt.
Many of the short stories I read – or at least ones I’ve read recently – would not fall into the categories of action-packed or suspense thriller. But Alex Taylor’s “The Coal Thief” could easily fall in with these types of stories – which makes it a pleasant and exciting change of pace.
With all of the action, Taylor still manages to provide an interesting change in character for 12 year-old Luke as he starts out his day as nervous and less-than-confident in his attempt to steal coal from a moving train. By the end of the day (and the story), Luke becomes tough and thick-skinned in the face of the day’s action and tragedy. Pulling this off within the course of one day is a nice little feat on the part of Taylor.
Because the story is set during an Appalachian winter, “The Coal Thief” reminds me of a Jack London story – the cold plays an important role. And the moral ambiguity of the hero brings to mind Ernest Hemingway.
This story is included in my copy of Degrees of Elevation: Short Stories of Contemporary Appalachia edited by Charles Dodd White and Page Seay. I read it when I selected the King of Clubs for week 48 of my Deal Me In 2017 short story project. My Deal Me In list can be found here. Deal Me In is hosted by Jay at Bibliophilopolis.