Anniversary #10!

Today, it’s been ten years since I started Mirror With Clouds and as I’ve been doing on this day at least for the last few years, here are my top ten favorite short stories that I’ve read this year based only on how much I enjoyed them:

10.) This Morning, This Evening, So Soon – James Baldwin

9.) Mama’s Missionary Money – Chester Himes

8.) Solo On The Drums – Ann Petry

7.) The Country In the Woman – Zora Neale Hurston

6.) Ritual – Crystal Wilkinson

5.) Shingles For The Lord – William Faulkner

4.) An Evening’s Entertainment – M. R. James

3.) Cry For Me – William Melvin Kelley

2.) The Sky is Gray – Ernest J. Gaines

And I had to consider the Number 1 spot to be a tie because I couldn’t decide between these two:

1.) Marigolds – Eugenia W. Collier

1.) Train Whistle Guitar – Albert Murray

Zora Neale Hurston: The Fire and the Cloud

Deal Me In 2021 – Week 52

‘But wait, O Moses!’ the lizard squeaked after him. ‘You have left your rod behind.’

‘Oh, Joshua will pick it up,’ he called back and strode on.

Many Biblical stories leave me wondering about more details, about the thoughts going through a character’s mind. Zora Neale Hurston’s story “The Fire and the Cloud” does just that at the point in time when Moses has led his people to the Promised Land but doesn’t get to go in.

Moses converses with a lizard as he looks at Canaan telling it how tired he is – giving it the impression that he is finished without technically saying that. Yes, Hurston relies on her readers to at least be familiar with the fact that Moses’ story has an ending and that ending occurs for Moses – not necessarily for the people he had been leading.

The talking lizard gives the story a fable style (as with several other of Hurston’s stories) but it’s the exhaustion and sadness of Moses that comes through as Hurston fills in some possible details to the Biblical story.

This story is included in Zora Neale Hurston’s collection Hitting a Straight Lick With a Crooked Stick. I read it for Week 52 of my Deal Me In 2021 short story project. Check out my Deal Me In list here. Deal Me In is hosted by Jay at Bibliophilopolis.

Ann Petry: Solo on the Drums

Deal Me In 2021 – Week 51

The sound seemed to come not from the drums but from deep inside himself; it was a sound that was being wrenched out of him – a violent, raging, roaring sound. As it issued from him he thought, this is the story of my love, this is the story of my hate, this is all there is left of me. And the sound echoed and re-echoed far up under the roof of the theater.

Kid Jones’ wife is leaving him for the piano player in the band he plays with in Ann Petry’s “Solo on the Drums”. His thoughts about this range all over the place. He jumps from his childhood, his time in the war and his relationship with his wife and the mixed up feelings he has for her and the piano player.

The interesting aspect of the story is that the present time is set during one of his drum solos. The third person narration sometimes takes on short choppy sentences as though they move along to the rhythm of the drums or they have to be short as they have to jump into his mind while he is concentrating on music.

This could be just a gimmick with a lesser writer but Petry blends everything together so well that the reader doesn’t have to think or wonder about everything that’s going on in his mind – it all makes sense and fits together perfectly with Kid’s performance.

This story is included in Black American Short Stories: A Century of the Best edited by John Henrick Clarke. I read it for Week 49 of my Deal Me In 2021 short story project. Check out my Deal Me In list here. Deal Me In is hosted by Jay at Bibliophilopolis.

John Henrik Clarke: Santa Claus Is A White Man

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Deal Me In 2021 – Week 50

When he left the large house where his mother was a servant, he was happy.

John Henrik Clarke’s short story “Santa Claus Is A White Man” is similar to Langston Hughe’s story “One Christmas Eve”. It also involves a small child’s loss of innocence in the face of racism. In Clarke’s story though, the innocence and the hatred don’t blend together as much. They are more diametrically opposed. The innocence is very innocent and the hatred is harsher, terrifying actually. Not just to a small child but to anyone.

This story is included in A Treasury of African-American Christmas Stories edited by Bettye Collier-Thomas. I read it when I selected the Two of Spades for my Deal Me In 2021 short story project. Check out my Deal Me In list here. Deal Me In is sponsored by Jay at Bibliophilopolis.

Jennifer Jordan: The Wife

Deal Me In 2021 – Week 49

Jennifer Jordan’s “The Wife” illustrates the dark side of rich suburban marriages. It’s not an uncommon topic among short stories since the 1950’s. Marta starts her marriage wanting it to be like a “Pepsi commercial”. What makes the story intriguing, though, is that Marta grows past this as she comes to a better understanding of herself and her relationship to her husband Jonathan.

In fact, her growth as a person is in direct contrast to the deterioration of her marriage. The story doesn’t end on a happy note. Jordan’s writing explains just how tragic a situation Marta is in even in the face of this growth:

Meanwhile, she would add this dose of bitter gall to her store of slights, bad memories, and disappointments and pray that, when the next blow came, she could remember one taste of honey.

This story is included in Black American Short Stories: A Century of the Best edited by John Henrick Clarke. I read it for Week 49 of my Deal Me In 2021 short story project. Check out my Deal Me In list here. Deal Me In is hosted by Jay at Bibliophilopolis.

Maya Angelou: Steady Going Up

Deal Me In 2021 – Week 48

Robert sat down in his seat. ‘Yes’m. I’m sorry. I didn’t have time to get you a Dr. Pepper.’

Robert rides a bus from Memphis to Cincinnati to see his sister in Maya Angelou’s story “Steady Going Up”. He sits in the back where he’s required to sit.

Something about the way Angelou writes this story gives the impression that she is playing with toy figurines that she moves around to tell the story. As strange as it sounds, it works giving the relationship between the characters a detached feeling. Given that nobody knows anyone on this bus trip, it makes sense.

The elderly lady that sits near Robert comes the closest to developing a “bond” between herself and Robert. When he tells her he didn’t have time to get her a Dr. Pepper, it’s kind of a brilliant understatement given the encounter Robert has with two white men during a stop.

This is a story that grew on me after I read it.

This story is included in Black American Short Stories: A Century of the Best edited by John Henrick Clarke. I read it for Week 48 of my Deal Me In 2021 short story project. Check out my Deal Me In list here. Deal Me In is hosted by Jay at Bibliophilopolis.

Frank Yerby: The Homecoming

Deal Me In 2021 – Week 47

Up on the edge of the skyline, a man stopped his plowing to wave at the passing train.

‘How come we always do that?’ Willie speculated idly. ‘Don’t know a soul on this train – not a soul – but he got to wave. Oh, well…’

Sergeant Willie Jackson comes home from World War II with a purple heart and an artificial leg in Frank Yerby’s “The Homecoming”. We don’t get too far into the story before we realize that the homecoming isn’t the grand type we usually associate with the word.

Willie encounters racism in the violent manner almost right away. He then encounters it with the white man who seems to think he is some sort of family to Willie. Telling Willie how lucky he was as a kid to go from back door to back door in town to beg for food.

Willie wants to find a new home but leaving isn’t as easy as he thought it might be. The story’s shocking and bizarre ending reveals just how trapped Willie is – after fighting for his home.

This story is included in Black American Short Stories: A Century of the Best edited by John Henrick Clarke. I read it for Week 47 of my Deal Me In 2021 short story project. Check out my Deal Me In list here. Deal Me In is hosted by Jay at Bibliophilopolis.

Arna Bontemps: A Summer Tragedy

Deal Me In 2021 – Week 46

Jennie sat on the side of the bed, and old Jeff Patton got down on one knee while she tied the bow knot. It was a slow and painful ordeal for each of them in this position. Jeff’s bones cracked, his knee ached, and it was only after a half dozen attempts that Jennie worked a semblance of a bow into the tie.

In Arna Bontemp’s “A Summer Tragedy”, Jeff Patton and his wife Jennie are getting dressed up. As the reader, we don’t know why; however, given the title, we sense something foreboding. Jeff thinks thoughts of desperation and fear. Jennie asks Jeff questions that give the sense that something bad has happened or will happen.

If it wasn’t for the wonderful writing and the strong characterizations of Jeff and Jennie and the presentation of such a long lasting marriage, this story would be less a tragedy and more a gimmick. Instead, we ache for Jeff and Jennie and recognize the strength alongside their despair.

This story is included in Black American Short Stories: A Century of the Best edited by John Henrick Clarke. I read it for Week 46 of my Deal Me In 2021 short story project. Check out my Deal Me In list here. Deal Me In is hosted by Jay at Bibliophilopolis.

John P. Davis: The Overcoat

Deal Me In 2021 – Week 45

It was late fall. The leaves outside the church lay dead and brown on the frozen earth. There was a smoky greenwood fire in the stove. Somebody, little David didn’t know who, was singing Nearer My God to Thee.

In John P. Davis’ “The Overcoat”, David is young enough to not fully understand everything going on in his life at the time that his mother dies. He’s sent to get the black doctor but finds him unavailable. Because of some racially charged incidents occurring prior to this situation, David decides not to bother the white doctor even though time is of the essence for his mother.

Davis tells the story from David’s point of view but it’s in third person. This kind of pulls the camera back and gives the reader a fuller story of why David doesn’t get the white doctor. While David is old enough to ask questions about his mother’s death, the author doesn’t give him a sense of regret (at least not an obvious one) because the bigger picture shows it wasn’t David’s fault.

This story is included in Black American Short Stories: A Century of the Best edited by John Henrick Clarke. I read it for Week 45 of my Deal Me In 2021 short story project. Check out my Deal Me In list here. Deal Me In is hosted by Jay at Bibliophilopolis.

Crystal Wilkinson: Women’s Secrets

Deal Me In 2021 – Week 44

Crystal Wilkinson’s “Women’s Secret’s” combines the safety and comfort of family and home life with the pressure, oppression and loneliness of living as a woman in the Appalachian community. The themes, though, can easily be transferred to other cultures.

Iola, a young girl, wakes up next to her mother and hears her grandmother and grandfather getting up early in the morning and starting on the household chores. Extremely tired, her mother jumps out of bed knowing she’s late getting started. Iola, staying in bed, then hears the conversation between her mother and her grandmother. The grandmother guesses that Iola’s mother is pregnant and her mother doesn’t say no.

In between the conversation Iola overhears, Wilkinson describes the outdoors, the small house, the breakfast that’s cooking, the warmth of the house as opposed to the coldness outside. All of this provides the small child with comfort even while imagining the harshness of the outside world.

The small actions and sounds of fixing breakfast, opening the screen door, soft crying, serious talking, heart-felt hugs all lead to the family sitting down to breakfast with the grandfather as the only one not “in the know”:

Grandpa just looks from Big Mama to Mama to me and shakes his head ’cause nobody says nothing. I look at Mama and Big Mama looking at each other again and all us women just hold our tongues and keep our secrets.

This story is included in Crystal Wilkinson’s collection Blackberries, Blackberries. I read it for Week 44 of my Deal Me In 2021 short story project. Check out my Deal Me In list here. Deal Me In is hosted by Jay at Bibliophilopolis.