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Maurice Thompson: The Legend of Potato Creek (Deal Me In 2016 – Week 13)

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Then, by an effort that evidently taxed his fading powers to the last degree, he fixed his eyes firmly on those of the young woman. Here was a martyr of the divine sort, true and unchangeable in the flame of the torture.

I selected the Two of Hearts for Week 13 of my Deal Me In 2016 short story project. I’ve designated Two’s to be Wild and Hearts is the suit I’ve designated for stories about my current home state of Kentucky. “The Legend of Potato Creek” by Maurice Thompson is set in Indiana, a previous home state of mine and not that far from Kentucky so it still loosely fits with my Hearts topic. I first heard of this story from Jay’s recent post over at Bibliophilopolis. Still a current Indiana resident, Jay’s Deal Me In 2016 list contains all stories with an Indiana connection.

I’m not sure of the difference between sentimental and melodramatic but I think both can describe this pleasant story.  Rose Turpin visits her uncle and on a warm summer day encounters Zach Jones, a sick man with a sick horse. In a not-quite-but-almost fairly tale manner, Rose has a healing effect on both the horse and the man.

Works of Maurice Thompson

I’m not one to put symbolism into every little detail of a story; however, a yellow butterfly continuously flits in and out of the story for no apparent reason – other than  perhaps to serve as a symbol. In this story, I would venture to guess that the butterfly represents something like “new life”- the new life that Zach and his horse receive when they meet Rose.

How long does this new life last? I won’t give that part away.

My Deal Me In 2016 list can be found here. Deal Me In is sponsored by Jay at Bibliophilopolis. I read this story on-line for free here.



4 thoughts on “Maurice Thompson: The Legend of Potato Creek (Deal Me In 2016 – Week 13)

  1. This story was probably one of my favorites so far. I’m working on a “quarterly report” of my first 13 weeks (some I haven’t even posted about yet) and may list my favorites. This was a sweet story, I thought, and a good standard bearer for Indiana literature of that era.

    I didn’t even make the connection about the butterfly but may go back and re-read now to see if I agree.

    1. I talked about it being fairy-tale like but that wasn’t really the word I was looking for to describe it. It wasn’t until I had finished my post that it dawned on me – “Legend”, that was the word I was looking for and it was right in the title. Anyway, I enjoyed the story very much.

  2. Hi Dale,
    Checking back in here because just this past weekend I read my other Thompson story form DMI 2017, and it was one of my favorites of the year. It’s called “The Pedagogue” if you want to look into it. It’s a couple posts away for me and I am still playing catch-up but I should be doing a write up of it soon. It’s kind of an Ichabod Crane vs. Brom Bones story moved west and recast, but I really loved Thompson’s writing in it. I may have highlighted half of it. (Ok, that’s an exaggeration, but I highlighted way more than usual. 🙂

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